Imagine that a client from the New Mexico tourist bureau presented you with the following text from a printed brochure. The client wants the information placed on the bureau's website.
Visit New Mexico, the Land of Enchantment. Accommodations are plentiful, including cabins and condominiums; camping and RV sites; guesthouses and dude ranches; spas and resorts. You'll enjoy the exciting recreational opportunities. Try skydiving or a hot air balloon ride. Enjoy the state's majestic scenic views by horseback, while mountain biking or hiking. Don't forget to visit the Native American museums; the cowboy, farm, and western museums; and the science and technology museums. While you're visiting New Mexico, don't miss seeing an authentic Wild West rodeo.
Use the tips on the previous page to rewrite the client's information in a clear, direct manner that a web visitor can easily scan.
